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日期:2006/08/18 01:09
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是對聯,聯是對,對是聯,聯對是,是聯對,對聯是   Raymond

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1642 )
日期:2008/07/03 10:04
留言者:余仔
電郵:yuyingyui@yahoo.com.hk

(沉思)
一曲未終,奏出漢帝昭君怨
六軍不發,緣起明皇太真情

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1643 )
日期:2008/07/06 08:03
留言者:Vincent

求上聯:

遇無良僱主, 工人嘆無糧! (微笑)

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1644 )
日期:2008/07/06 09:51
留言者:mmm

養家活兒孩, 為斗米拆腰
遇無良僱主, 工人嘆無糧

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1645 )
日期:2008/07/07 20:16
留言者:文武SO

求好景芳客,小姐晒好境
遇無良僱主,工人嘆無糧



(大笑) (大笑) (大笑)

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1646 )
日期:2008/07/06 15:03
留言者:Vincent

文武so兄,

好文釆, 好幽默! (表情23) (好!)

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1647 )
日期:2008/07/06 17:37
留言者:san


賞有藝戲子,觀眾駡有偽
遇無良僱主, 工人嘆無糧 (表情6)

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1648 )
日期:2008/07/06 22:13
留言者:文武SO

非常多谢Vincent,以及之前各位对小弟的表扬。小弟還禮!

胡乱涂鸦。“文采”。受之有愧。哈哈。玩下啫。



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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1649 )
日期:2008/07/07 23:16
留言者:a.pan


肚爆又肥腸,良心如墨亮
遇無良僱主,工人嘆無糧

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1650 )
日期:2008/07/07 23:32
留言者:假老師

簡單韻律:

遇~~無良~~顧主.工人~~嘆~~無糧.

肚爆~~又~~肥腸,良心~~如~~黑亮.

"肚爆"兩個字對一個"遇"字,韻律錯.

顧主是名詞,肥腸是指人名嗎?

工人是名詞良心是人名嗎?

下聯有兩個同音"良""糧"字,請你一定要找出兩個同音字應對.

請呀!

(表情40)

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1651 )
日期:2008/07/08 00:49
留言者:卡德森

遇無良僱主,工人嘆無糧
嫁有才老公,老婆喜有財

指教!指教!

(表情34)

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1652 )
日期:2008/07/08 03:38
留言者:香字頭

雖說遊戲對聯,基本要求還是要有的。

且看下聯的格局是5+5,先天性就缺乏對聯特有的字句 "岩慚"、詞藻清奇、誦讀抑揚之美,再加上出聯時偏重某詞的連瑣性與同音異義,完全忽略了平仄的組合。如此一來,唸起來別扭,越是對得工整,連著唸時越加別扭。要是把它當作五言律詩的偶句吧,平仄卻又犯規,怎麼辦呢? 沒辦法,就當是打油句吧! (Vincent 兄請恕直言。)

遇無良僱主 工人嘆無糧
仄平平仄仄 平平仄平平

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1654 )
日期:2008/07/08 09:04
留言者:Vincent

香兄說的是, 敢煩幫我修改一下 (表情14) (表情14)

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1655 )
日期:2008/07/08 13:14
留言者:香字頭

Vincent 兄所指的 "無糧",大抵是廣東話的 "冇糧出" --- 沒有工資吧!
沒有工資,就買不到糧食,也就 "冇米落鑊"。在避免廣東口語化而又不損原意的基礎下,小弟試擬上聯為:

恨僱主無良,百姓無糧成炊事

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1656 )
日期:2008/07/08 14:54
留言者:文武SO

恨僱主無良, 百姓無糧成炊事
得賢妻開導, 高人開道化齋經


(大笑) (大笑) (大笑)

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Re: 詩詞歌賦聯謎區 ( No.1657 )
日期:2008/07/08 15:31
留言者:路過

僱恨無良主,克扣人工成憾事
家無隔宿糧,難為巧婦無米炊

賜教!賜教! (表情37)

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